Talk:Weather/@comment-4714390-20120411145405

Very good work Nacho. I have made a few changes and put a line through some words/sentences with mistakes - please look at them and try to correct them.

Your definition of "drop" was not really a definition at all. I have left a suggestion in brackets, which you can use to help you.

Be careful with the use of the verb "let", it seems as though you are still not 100% comfortable using it - keep experimenting until you understand it better (use google to see some samples of sentences using "let").

Finally (=D), try not to repeat words too often. In your text at the end, you have used the words "finally", "let" and "exit" far too often and it sounds repetitive. Your use of "finally" is correct (although repetitive), but I'm not sure you have completely understood how to use the other two words.